WALT SHOW NOT TELL As I was walking towards grannys house the strong scent of freshly baked apple and cinnamon cookies seeped through the woven picnic basket. I can start to see the real tarseal track leading to grannys when something caught my eye. It looks quite large but shiny and also really colorful, is it a giant dinosaur still in existence, is the wolf dressed up as granny again. As I got closer I could see the shape starting to form, a ladder! Maybe its a tree house! She ran over to the mysterious object and started to climb the ladder. It was about 3 to 4 meters long and it was a bit overgrown as there were branches and pinecones sticking out everywhere. oh no my red velvet hoodie is stuck on that branch ahhh there we go all fixed. A colorful duvet and pillows? A BED?!?! When she took a closer look at it there was a lump it the bed as i pulled the covers back all I could see is golden hair in curls well at least she has a place to stay now.
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HI it's Rebecca here from room 3 Otautau school,
ReplyDeleteI love you'r story!! WALT show don't tell aswell.
I also like the theme of little red riding hod!
Hi I am Cayla your blogging buddy i really like your blog well done :D
ReplyDeletewow i like your blog I am your blogging buddy wow done
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