Friday 14 August 2015

I Remember when poem...

I Remember When...


The horses strong strides pounding against the hard, cold racetrack ground, the frosty grass crunching beneath his hooves, the snappy air biting at my bare skin like a swarm of sand flies Attacking you on a hot summer day.

That was winter.

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2 comments:

  1. Unknown29 August 2015 at 09:13

    Hi Bronah
    This is a really nice piece of writing!
    I like how you said the frosty grass crunching beneath his hooves.
    From Ella M

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  2. Unknown29 August 2015 at 09:13

    Hi Bronah
    This is a really nice piece of writing!
    I like how you said the frosty grass crunching beneath his hooves.
    From Ella M

    ReplyDelete

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