Wednesday 27 August 2014

Marsh Mellow barebone

WALT: CREATE A BARE BONE PLAN

  1. Boy goes on a scout camp
  2. boy opens marshmallows      
  3. starts roasting marshmallow
  4. A rustle in the bushes
  5. two big green eyes look at the boy
  6. boy screams 
  7. drops the marshmallow in the fire
  8. Monster lets out a yelp
  9. fire grows bigger
  10. boy sees a big black horse (Thestles)
  11. boy sticks out his hand to pat it
  12. horse nudges boy kindly 
  13. boy realises that is has wings 
  14. boy sits on horse
  15. horse lifts into the air
  16. boy and horse become best friends
  17. live happy ever after!








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  1. Unknown27 August 2014 at 10:36

    Hi Bronah
    You might want to change some of the letters to other colour as theyre the same as the background. Awesome story. I really like how you said about two green eyes looking at the boy.
    From Ella R-W

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    1. Anonymous4 September 2014 at 09:10

      Hi, Yeah, I agree, it is really good but it wuld be even better if the colours of the W.A.L.T. were easier to read!!!

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  2. Unknown27 August 2014 at 10:38

    Dear Bronah
    That bare bones plan is amazing I like how you added a bit of harry potter fantasy into it. Great Work
    Sophie

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