Marsh Mellow barebone

WALT: CREATE A BARE BONE PLAN

1. Boy goes on a scout camp
2. boy opens marshmallows      
3. starts roasting marshmallow
4. A rustle in the bushes
5. two big green eyes look at the boy
6. boy screams 
7. drops the marshmallow in the fire
8. Monster lets out a yelp
9. fire grows bigger
10. boy sees a big black horse (Thestles)
11. boy sticks out his hand to pat it
12. horse nudges boy kindly 
13. boy realises that is has wings 
14. boy sits on horse
15. horse lifts into the air
16. boy and horse become best friends
17. live happy ever after!

Hugo Carbet- A-Z trains

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S.P.C.A CUPCAKE DAY

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Ulyssess Moore And The Long Lost Map

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Main Stars-101 Things To Do With Your Family

101 Things to do with your Family

1	Love each other
2	Watch a DVD
3	Go to the Movies
4	Bike Ride
5	Walk on the Beach
6	Share a Book
7	Walk the Dog
8	Wash the Dog
9	Sunday Drive
10	Play Cards
11	Go on a Picnic
12	Toast Marshmallows
13	Play Board Games
13	Play Basketball
14	Play Netball
15	Bush Walk
16	Camping
17	Gold Panning
18	Colour in
19	Dinner Party
20	Swim at River
21	Go to Surf Lifesaving
22	Play Wii
23	Draw
24	Make Leggo
25	Watch TV
26	Gardening
27	Whitebaiting
28	Eat meals together
29	Go out for Dinner
30	Birthday Parties
31	Visit Friends
32	Visit Family
33	Overseas Holiday
34	Weekend Away
35	Tidy House
36	Get Groceries
37	Skiing
38	Go to the Lake
39	Fishing
40	Go to Pony Club
41	Skype
42	Bake
43	Have a BBQ
44	Late night walk
45	Beach Holiday
46	History walks
47	Tramping
48	4WD trips
49	Visit Gloworms
50	Look for Greenstone
51	Play Swingball
52	Play Cricket
53	Attend Festivals
54	Look at stars etc
55	Have a spa
56	Go to Theme Parks
57	Go to Dog Shows
58	Eat Fish’n’chips at Beach
59	Make Loom Bands
60	Have fun with other families
61	Go to the Museum
62	Go to Art Galleries
63	Attend charity/fundraising events
64	Spend time with Grandparents
65	Watch the News
66	Discuss national & world issues
67	Just hangout doing very little
68	Laugh
69	Sing
70	Play charades
71	Make beach sculptures
72	Go to Punakaiki Caves
73	Walk Point Elizabeth
74	Go Swimming
75	Go to Australia
76	Visit the seal colony
77	Make chocolate fudge
78	Go tobogganing
79	Make pizza’s
80	Geo-caching
81	Jump off Jetty at Lake Kaniere
82	Create a family tree
83	Go on ancestry.com
84	Go Tadpoling
85	Swim at the pool
86	Go paddle boarding
87	Go canoeing
88	Play on the trampoline
89	Go on Bumper Boats
90	Go hydrosliding
91	Collect fire wood
92	Climb trees
93	Have a bonfire
94	Clean the car
95	Visit the cemetery
96	Go to the climbing wall
97	Make daisy chains
98	Go shopping at the Mall
99	Go to Orana Park
100	Go go-karting
101	Sit & think of a 101 things we could do as a family

Thanks for Reading the things that I like to do with my family and I hope that you might like to do some with your family!!

Message in a bottle

Message in a bottle

W . A . L . T

Show not tell:

Use more commas and speech marks:

As I walk along the sandy beach,

a object takes away my speech,

walking slowly, step by step,

I pick up the bottle and take a deep breath,

I see a little wooden cork,

“oh my” I shout “I’m such a dork!!”,

as I pull out a little note,

theres a picture of a sail boat,

and as I am just standing there,

a person just begins to glare,

and so I put the note back in,
and throw it in the sea again.